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Friday, December 23, 2011

Lines that do NOT belong in YA fiction ....

'The light was thin and wan, like the red lamps in the seedier districts of cities.'

... sometimes I really, really suck at writing YA :p

OTOH, this version of Falling Toward The Sky has over a single page before any dialogue is spoken which makes it nicely odd for me. I swear, if I ever manage to finish this story people would look at the first draft and think someone else had written it.

2 comments:

  1. ...I think that line would still fall under YA ;)

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  2. Well, it would for older YA stuff (and things set on this earth). Boy & Fox, no :p

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