Hail Story :)

Hail Story

It wasn’t a dark and stormy night, but that wasn’t for lack of trying despite it being two in the afternoon. Rain had turned into hail and Kev and Sue hurried through it. hoods up and trying to outdo each other with curse words as they hurried across the road. The storm was cold, the world wet and they simply didn’t think. One side, to the other. A hop, skip, a jump and there was a bus shelter that was empty like an omen.

The car skidded, and the driver said words Kev and Sue would have had to look up in dictionaries. All the money that Robert was saving for a self-driving car became a horror story inside his head. He wasn’t driving fast in the rain, but one doesn’t need to. You can fall down a flight of stairs and never get back up again, and a car is far much more than than that.

Sue tried to protect Kev. There was that much, but it made no difference who might have loved the other more. There was movement, and more movement, and Robert scrambled out. Ran to the kids. pleaded with a God he only believed in when he had no choice (sometimes this was too often) but neither moved and the rain and hail were hiding too much and not enough.

He called for the emergency services, begged those that arrived for his life to be taken. Offered to give organs, years, anything but it was too late. Robert swung wildly at the first person who tried to comfort him, but the police just handcuffed him and told him he wasn’t going to escape via them. Families arrived. His. Theirs. Parents who had never met, having no ides their children had been dating. A figure that would never be written.

No one blamed him. Robert could not understand. Could not forgive.

As Fixed By Jay:

It wasn’t a dark and stormy night, but that wasn’t for lack of trying the fault of the storm which was just being what storms are you know! despite it being two in the afternoon which is a really good time to be because of tea and snacks!. Rain had turned into very jaysome hail and Kev and Sue hurried through it and were holding hands but you forgot to mention this binding you know!. hoods up and trying to outdo each other with curse words as they hurried across the road being really jaysome and cute about it too!. The storm was cold, the world wet and they simply didn’t think and that’s okay cuz sometimes a Jay doesn’t either when I get really busy!. One side, to the other. A hop, skip, a jump and there was a bus shelter that was empty like an omen. Which isn’t an omen because it was probably really lonely and should have had lots of people at it!
The car skidded, and the driver said words Kev and Sue would have had to look up in dictionaries. All the money that Robert was saving for a self-driving car became a horror story inside his head. He wasn’t driving fast in the rain, but one doesn’t need to. You can fall down a flight of stairs and never get back up again, and a car is far much more than than that.
…. … … I think maybe you have problems with being jaysome!
Sue tried to protect Kev cuz of course people try and protect each other you know!. There was that much, but it made no difference who might have loved the other more. I’m getting rid of that not-jaysome entirely okay?! There was movement, and more movement, and Robert scrambled out. Ran to the kids. pleaded with a God he only believed in when he had no choice (sometimes this was too often) but neither moved and the rain and hail were hiding too much and not enough. Okay, maybe I should just get rid of the rest of the story?! Because gods don’t fix what already happened and everyone knows this!
He called for the emergency services, begged those that arrived for his life to be taken, which even a Jay knows they don’t do so this is more than confusled you know! Offered to give organs, years, anything but it was too late. Only it’s never too late to be jaysome! Robert swung wildly at the first person who tried to comfort him, but the police just handcuffed him and told him he wasn’t going to escape via them even if he didn’t want to escape and the narrator was totally wrong about this!. Families arrived. His. Theirs. Parents who had never met, having no ides their children had been dating. A future that would never be written - only it could be by their ghosts since death is an end and not the end and even @fakesurprise knows this!
No one blamed him. Robert could not understand. Could not forgive.But they were being jaysome and he understood it just fine in time!