Friday, December 30, 2011

Cell phones and tea

She has been staring at her cell phone for over half an hour, her tea cold water filled with flecks of colour, lips pressed together.

I wish I knew her number, so I could call her, so the phone would ring.

But I don't know what I'd say.
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  1. 1000th.monkey12/30/2011 08:42:00 pm

    ...now, that just has *stalker* written all over it ;)

    Happy New Year, alcar!!

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  2. alcar12/30/2011 09:14:00 pm

    You too :)

    Just trying out an experimental story being told as fragments OF the story. In theory. assuming I go anywhere with it.

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  3. 1000th.monkey12/30/2011 11:17:00 pm

    Seriously, sounds interesting though :)

    ...I picked away a little at something new as well :) Definitely more in the realm of actual fairytale than anything I've attempted before. No desert climate this time... it's ice and snow!

    ...must pull out my book of Inuit tales/folklore soon to absorb a little of that *flavour*

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