I'd like to tell you my life
fell apart when I got caught up in a turf war, but I'd probably be
lying seeing as I was busy eating the bones of a pigeon in the
dumpster behind the McDonalds on Fourth and Cameron when two
werewolves crashed together in a frenzy of growls. So I didn't notice
them snarling threats at each other and get out of dodge. What can I
say? It was a really good pigeon: four days dead, marinated in fries
and gravy. The bones were like chocolate, the marrow warm butter.
Never mind. I doubt you're a fan.
.. IF the story of a 16 year old ghoul in the broken remains of a City in a world where magic has come back and led people to flee cities entirely works as YA. It might. The trick is finding and holding the character's voice; I've deleted entire sections that felt too adult/exposition-y thus far. But it is fun and a neat and weird change to work on, so that's always good. I've no idea how it's going to end but at least have a basic idea/framework to pants from.
Plus, mad scientists. Which always are fun.
Oh my goodness... Is our entire writing group going YA?!?!
ReplyDeleteLOVE the voice in this!! Seriously!
...so much so I'm reading/posting this from my phone
Yeah, the voice IS a lot of fun in this. But I am not sure a ghoul who eats the bones of bodies truly fits with the YA spirit :)
ReplyDeleteAs long as you don't get too graphic in the descriptions, I think it would totally work!
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