“No stuffed bear should tell you they
are a bear of very little brain but have a large...” Charlie
trailed off. “I need a drink. I need several drinks.”
....
this line will not survive into the second draft of the story :)
We love people for who they are, not
who we desire them to be, or we don’t really love them at all.
... today's interesting line.
... today's interesting line.
The last thing his grandfather told
him:
"I wish I was old enough to start forgetting you."
"I wish I was old enough to start forgetting you."
Writing goes well. Did 15K yesterday,
going slower this morning as I feel out a new scene and get back into
one character's voice as follows:
I have a list of stupid sayings I hate. Number one is ‘if you love something, let it go’. Hell with that noise: if you love something you hold it, keep it, cherish it. The world is littered with things we can’t hold, or stuff that slips away from us. There’s not enough love or things we love to go around tossing it aside. I think men invented that one, when I’m being mean, since it’s easier for them to just toss stuff aside, loved or not, and move on – as long as they can dodge child support payments.
I have a list of stupid sayings I hate. Number one is ‘if you love something, let it go’. Hell with that noise: if you love something you hold it, keep it, cherish it. The world is littered with things we can’t hold, or stuff that slips away from us. There’s not enough love or things we love to go around tossing it aside. I think men invented that one, when I’m being mean, since it’s easier for them to just toss stuff aside, loved or not, and move on – as long as they can dodge child support payments.
From this morning's output thus far:
No other questions, no pushing, no desire for answers. I am a magician and there are few things in the world that scare me more than the depth of Jay’s trust in me and what might happen when I fail it.
No other questions, no pushing, no desire for answers. I am a magician and there are few things in the world that scare me more than the depth of Jay’s trust in me and what might happen when I fail it.
From this morning:
“You’re chained up underneath the church,” I snap. “Of course we came here seeking answers; It’s not like you’re on a list of tourist attractions for Sunny Creek. ”
“You’re chained up underneath the church,” I snap. “Of course we came here seeking answers; It’s not like you’re on a list of tourist attractions for Sunny Creek. ”
I felt fine, but I knew that didn’t
mean anything at all. I could be eating enough radiation right now to
kill me in four days and I’d never know.
We were made to survive. That don’t mean we were made to come back home.
We were made to survive. That don’t mean we were made to come back home.
This is Josh's sanity speaking. I am
alone now. I am so alone. He tried to sleep. I forced him, at
midnight. He got back up at 2 AM to write and begin the one story
AGAIN. Help me. I don't add to his word count. I think my time is
limited.
The aliens were not what we had
expected at all. We had been prepared for armies, for E.T., even for
abductions.
We were not prepared for the boy band.
YAY! Done fun scene. Sci-Fi story set
in the far future. The characters have found remnants of one of the
original colonies on the world, and the tech is so beyond primitive
to them that they're convinced it must have been an alien settlement
:)
“People aren’t monsters, even the
worst of us.”
“That’s not what the war taught us.”
“The war ended. That should have taught you something as well.”
“That’s not what the war taught us.”
“The war ended. That should have taught you something as well.”
Total output at work (for a later
scene):
"You misunderstand: I don't hate you. I do not even pity you. You are not worth that much notice. I suppose I may mildly regret knowing you exist at all."
"You misunderstand: I don't hate you. I do not even pity you. You are not worth that much notice. I suppose I may mildly regret knowing you exist at all."
I
know six phrases in Atlantean. but they're all Yo Momma jokes.
“You have driven the universe to many
monstrous things.”
“Maybe the rest of the universe just
needed an excuse.”
“That is possible, yes. I do not
know. I am – no longer capable of trusting my own judgement in
these matters. I believe it is why I allowed you to find out about
me.”
My new nano (I know...) is going to
involve a bitter washed-up author murdering Chris Baty and the entire
nanowrimo board of directors [who might be ninjas] under the belief
that nanowrimo is an assault on Literature and an insult to real
authors while he desperately tried to get his thriller novels that
died out with the fall of communism revamped to fit into a world he
no longer feels he belongs in.
He may, or may not, be having a mental breakdown.
He may, or may not, be having a mental breakdown.
My daughter thought writing 50,000
words in a month would make her an author. It was like finding out
one of your children had decided to become a neonazi or a
libertarian. The worst part was knowing Jeremy Burke would have
handled it better: when he discovered that The Mongoose might have
successfully killed and replaced a fellow CIA operator, he coldly
began setting a trap for his enemy, certain that a man who believed
he was destined to destroy ‘the cobra of capitalism’ would make
errors in the end.
I was not the protagonist I'd written in my novels. I just wanted a drink. I had no plan beyond that.
I was not the protagonist I'd written in my novels. I just wanted a drink. I had no plan beyond that.
Her eyes narrowed. “Also, Riley
crashed mom’s car into the overpass at two am.”
“A shame about the overpass.” I sipped my coffee.
“And I’m pregnant.”
“As long as it’s not with the antichrist.”
She sat back at that. “I’m considering sending the three thousand words I wrote last night as a short story to the New Yorker.”
I sat my coffee down. “We aren’t discussing this.”
“Yes, we are. Nanowrimo is about setting goals and achieving them, dad. I don’t see why you hate it so much.”
“You cannot write 50,000 words in a month and call it a novel. Not a real one that can get published.”
“I know that.”
“And you’ll still know that when you’re done? If people ask if you’ve written novels, you’ll say, ‘Oh, no, just some drafts that weren’t any good’? False hope is not better than no hope at all. Anyone who says otherwise is a liar.”
“A shame about the overpass.” I sipped my coffee.
“And I’m pregnant.”
“As long as it’s not with the antichrist.”
She sat back at that. “I’m considering sending the three thousand words I wrote last night as a short story to the New Yorker.”
I sat my coffee down. “We aren’t discussing this.”
“Yes, we are. Nanowrimo is about setting goals and achieving them, dad. I don’t see why you hate it so much.”
“You cannot write 50,000 words in a month and call it a novel. Not a real one that can get published.”
“I know that.”
“And you’ll still know that when you’re done? If people ask if you’ve written novels, you’ll say, ‘Oh, no, just some drafts that weren’t any good’? False hope is not better than no hope at all. Anyone who says otherwise is a liar.”
Best line from last night's writing at
Chapters....
"Christopher is a first-year student whose nanowrimo novel is going to look like a five year old trying to write Lolita.”
"Christopher is a first-year student whose nanowrimo novel is going to look like a five year old trying to write Lolita.”
From today's writing output:
CASPER: Centre for Secure Poltergeist Elimination Research
CASPER: Centre for Secure Poltergeist Elimination Research
It is a bad sign when you try and
google a conspiracy theory you vaguely recall to use in a story,
manage to recall it and realize you know more about it than the
entire wikipedia entry ON it :p
All I want is to tattoo these words
On the inside of your dreams.
A short story in sex
six words.
He found her burning her novel draft in
the garage. "What are you doing? You worked all month on that!"
"I know. It is better this way.
You'll want to read it and I put you in it." And she smiled,
bright and glassy. "You don't want to see what I did to you in
my story." She laughed, short and sharp, her whisper carrying
just over the burning flames as she said again: "It is better
this way."
He moved to a newer country because
there would be less history to study in school.
He
looked up from the local paper. “Dear, it says here than in 1970 I
could have placed you in an institution just on my word alone. Food
for thought, eh?”
“If
it was the 70s, I would have wanted that,” she snapped back.
Does
any holiday exist for which the deadline to it does not terrify some
like unto the end of days?
“She
was like a mother to me.”
“Ah.
She was your mother.”
“I
know. That’s what I said.”
After the blinding, he was no longer
able to see anything save for corporate logos.
New loss, same hope.
The
only time he was ever struck by inspiration was the time he was
struck by lightning. Taking up golfing was the only logical
conclusion.
“It is not that your poem isn’t good. Far from it. It merely requires a wheelchair ramp.”
“What?”
“There
are laws, my boy, and your poem is not accessible.”
“It
is a sin before God and man!”
“I
really don’t think you understand what 3-way stop means.”
“I
lied, I lied, to get inside,”
The
devil said with a broken smile.
“If
you could let me out of you
I
would be much obliged.”
Why
is everyone so concerned about robots rising up against humanity and
taking over the world? Don’t they realize that housecats did that
years ago?
When
her son counted the number of people on the bus, he always added one.
“Not
wanting to exist forever is, I feel, a sure sign of sanity.”
We
are all fragments of unfinished poems: the lucky ones are rhyming
couplets.
“What
if art is not a reaction against man’s fate in the universe?”
“Art
if creation. To create for its own sake is art.”
“Perhaps
so. But consider: nothing exists in vacuum. All art is a response,
a reaction. One cannot make a statement without having something to
state.”
“It
might just make me happy.”
“I’ve
no doubt it does. But to be happy must there not also be a sadness
you again against?”
Sometimes
we can sing in ways even gods forget to dream.
Every
monster has a human side to them. This is what makes them, in the
end, so very monstrous.
If
poltergeists were real, wouldn’t security alarms go off more often
without any discernible cause?
Everything
is bigger when you are a child and sometimes – not often, but
sometimes – some things always remain that way.
If we can make it through the failure
of our dreams
about ourselves, each other, the world
entire –
if we can fall through that but hold
together
with fingers, worlds, whispers,
promises.
If we can hold together with cracked
hearts.
If we can make each other whole
Our
dreams won't matter then.
No
one speaks English over a tannoy system – there is not a one of us
who hears the same words.
I
love mornings that are my own, coffee brewing in a pot, the world
quiet outside my apartment and a day free of distractions such as
work. I love stories that come quickly and poems that can take days
to form, the long waiting and deep relaxation of time that is my own
to waste or spend as I see fit. I love how things can hold together
even when they fall apart and that we are all stronger than we know
but so seldom have to learn that.
“You
plan to steal a car even though you said stealing is wrong?”
“I
plan to kill the owner first, so it’s acquiring,” he says
triumphantly. “Dead people don’t have stuff so it’s not
stealing.”
She
realized she was becoming too much a fan of Doctor Who when her
little cousin asked if Grandma was coming home from the hospital and
all she said was: “Spoilers.”
“I
hate how much I need you.”
“Woof?”
“I
know my master, the Lord of the Undying Wastes, was supposed
to wake and ravage the lands of the living and the death – all of
that, yes. But no one set his alarm and he really could use some
coffee first. Perhaps we could reschedule this for the next time
there are two blue moons in the sky and the sun bleeds in the
heavens?”
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